averyavary's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pacman]

My thoughts on the art.

1. Design and style. It has a interesting style like a pacman world style. But more realistic. I find it weird that the boots Are as high as pacman. Just a little thing I thought was weird.

2. Color. Need I explain? It's his main colors, would be better with blending and shading.

3 Other Details. It looks good and you did well. Just some color correction and that's about it.

In total. 3.5* it's good and all. But does need shading and blending. Then it would look really good. And ever frontpage!

Ardhamon responds:

Thanks so much for the critique. I could have certainly added in some shading and blending. But other than that I love the support and the review. Thanks so much.

[Thicc LIbrarian (Wicke)]

My Thoughts on the piece of art

1. Design. I Like the Design (Especially being a Thicc Character ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ) Just Ajust some of her shaping on here arms and it'll look Much better and very clean.

2. Color. Good color and blends all together (With the Thicc ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) )

3. Other things. Very Detailed. and JUICY THICC. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

In all Seriousness. i give it a 4.5* (and 5 for thicc ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ) Its good. Just the arms really and thats about it really.

HellishUrsine responds:

Thank you very much for the critique.

[Starlight]

My Thoughts To Spill

1: Good Style. I like the style you chose. a cartoony animated feel. Great Stuff.

2:Good Choice Of Color. The Colors Really Blend Together. and it makes it stand out. which i like imo

3:Good Balance I thought at First it was positioned oddly. but when i looked at it again. it seemed pretty well to be balance, good job!

In total: 4.5* I personally liked this. will save.

LinkNiak responds:

THANKS! :DD